tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post1489238991889107825..comments2023-08-06T04:09:05.980-05:00Comments on Cornell DeVille : ENTRY 12Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-75671941082079580012010-01-31T22:12:42.464-06:002010-01-31T22:12:42.464-06:00I love this. Looks like a great story. It reminds ...I love this. Looks like a great story. It reminds me of the movie Folks and I loved that.<br /><br />Nothing to add to your great query. Good luck.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03216407428320615449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-28459498987138725232010-01-31T16:28:44.574-06:002010-01-31T16:28:44.574-06:00I've read this book, and I can tell you that i...I've read this book, and I can tell you that it's very well-written and the query does the book great justice.Sagenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-27614089030206948862010-01-31T16:26:59.835-06:002010-01-31T16:26:59.835-06:00This query has a great amount of heart! I love th...This query has a great amount of heart! I love that you've written the elusive boy MG. Great job!Amanda Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13076186186805723426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-47206266852288129702010-01-31T16:12:55.732-06:002010-01-31T16:12:55.732-06:00Still love this and want to read the book. Great t...Still love this and want to read the book. Great the way you string us along thinking Gramps is another kid. Best wishes with this!Michelle L. Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18144191129362767115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-38252436190538638162010-01-31T15:45:13.888-06:002010-01-31T15:45:13.888-06:00I get emotional just reading this query. The stake...I get emotional just reading this query. The stakes are high, the conflict well presented, and the protagonist likable. <br /><br />I would make a minor change<br />'from sledding to shooting (at the range - remove for sentance flow) to prune <br />juice drinking contests.' 'This season they had promised each other that they would <br />go up to Wyoming and kill a big seven-point elk (this season)' <br />Just IMO. But I would defo want to read more!Gemhttp://www.gemmacooper.co.uknoreply@blogger.com