tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post277158297092031735..comments2023-08-06T04:09:05.980-05:00Comments on Cornell DeVille : ENTRY 7Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-50871118461122365202010-02-02T09:23:24.679-06:002010-02-02T09:23:24.679-06:00Ha ha. Like others I thought of Clue, which for me...Ha ha. Like others I thought of Clue, which for me isn't a bad thing. BUT...you might want to consider if that's the connotation YOU want associated with your piece. I'd certainly keep reading.V.R. Leavitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04695046154516205907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-18237104218282369362010-01-27T15:51:18.063-06:002010-01-27T15:51:18.063-06:00I immediately think of Clue. And not in a bad way....I immediately think of Clue. And not in a bad way. I'd read on for sure.Sarah Jensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18385403676603047861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-56008247566881121102010-01-23T23:13:26.829-06:002010-01-23T23:13:26.829-06:00I want to know more, which is a good thing caused ...I want to know more, which is a good thing caused I'd read on.Maryeahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15961789479496203973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-1162231346635951242010-01-23T14:17:55.027-06:002010-01-23T14:17:55.027-06:00Oops. Meant to say "This is great".Oops. Meant to say "This is great".jennbaileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12984596786467447031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-54874317054840935522010-01-23T14:16:39.510-06:002010-01-23T14:16:39.510-06:00This if great! Putting Mr. Mustard in the tub make...This if great! Putting Mr. Mustard in the tub makes him vulnerable, but the murderous look makes him formidable and I want to know what circumstances caused this. Nicely done.jennbaileyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12984596786467447031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-13371690249014444752010-01-23T13:24:44.104-06:002010-01-23T13:24:44.104-06:00like this a lot and I love the Mr. Mustard touch.
...like this a lot and I love the Mr. Mustard touch.<br /><br />For some reason it threw me, though, because it took me a moment to realize he was fully dressed. I just assumed he was taking a bath.melodyhttp://bleudaisies.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-5858179075587192182010-01-23T07:00:29.739-06:002010-01-23T07:00:29.739-06:00Short and snappy - would definitely like to read m...Short and snappy - would definitely like to read more!Rebecca Eminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01931904595437049369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-6901677499327504342010-01-22T21:30:57.683-06:002010-01-22T21:30:57.683-06:00Wow. Love. So clean, simple, and concise. Nothing ...Wow. Love. So clean, simple, and concise. Nothing extra in there that needs to be there. (Though, "in the middle of the tub" is a bit odd. Unless it's a terribly large tub, I think you could get away with just saying "in the tub.")<br /><br />I'm not sure I even really have anything in the way of suggestions or advice on this one. It's amazing. Hooks you, and yes, I definitely did picture him in a tub of mustard. ;)Birdiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11335150122105342264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-39029218070955365112010-01-22T21:14:01.036-06:002010-01-22T21:14:01.036-06:00Love this. Definitely keep reading.
Did anyone el...Love this. Definitely keep reading.<br /><br />Did anyone else imagine him in a tub filled with mustard?Peta Jinnath Andersenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14388142098775012377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-63797789031719488392010-01-22T21:10:13.021-06:002010-01-22T21:10:13.021-06:00Oh, this is great! I'd read on just because I ...Oh, this is great! I'd read on just because I loved Clue as a kid. LOVE the name.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-16096934129396662022010-01-22T20:59:38.054-06:002010-01-22T20:59:38.054-06:00Love it! sounds fun, intriquing and I want to know...Love it! sounds fun, intriquing and I want to know more!<br /><br />I love the title too!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00704081723842644412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-48408337496853207612010-01-22T20:37:59.612-06:002010-01-22T20:37:59.612-06:00Love the title, love the opener. I guess he could ...Love the title, love the opener. I guess he could be sitting in an empty tub, but I wasn't sure you needed the "wet to the skin," bit. I mean, his skin would naturally be wet, wouldn't it? Unless of course the tub was empty :)<br />Very fun. I would read on.Michelle L. Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18144191129362767115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-15877418466336307862010-01-22T19:15:46.131-06:002010-01-22T19:15:46.131-06:00Wow! I love it. I love the name, Mr. Mustard and t...Wow! I love it. I love the name, Mr. Mustard and the murderous look in his eye. Great Hook! I would definitely read on.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03216407428320615449noreply@blogger.com