tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post6583592936167051425..comments2023-08-06T04:09:05.980-05:00Comments on Cornell DeVille : ENTRY 16Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-90009376926174721752010-02-01T14:50:32.202-06:002010-02-01T14:50:32.202-06:00This sounds like a really fun story, but what sets...This sounds like a really fun story, but what sets it off from other boy/girl animal stories? And what's the word count. I would also state a bio or any writing experience and a thank you. Good luck!J.A. Soudershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17460557430817566294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-12080474715043592532010-01-31T20:20:16.951-06:002010-01-31T20:20:16.951-06:00Love the title and all it's implications. Soun...Love the title and all it's implications. Sounds like a cute story, but I agree with others that you need to make it stand out a bit more - somehow. Good luck with this!melodycolleenhttp://bleudaisies.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-21244120207920669332010-01-31T18:12:31.639-06:002010-01-31T18:12:31.639-06:00In general I think you've done a nice job here...In general I think you've done a nice job here, but the language could be more dynamic. You've done a good job of staying in a 9-year-old voice but I think it could be more compelling. It sounds like a great theme.Sonja Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14267178241224627287noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-70759744123857995722010-01-31T18:04:21.247-06:002010-01-31T18:04:21.247-06:00I love the name of the dog and the story looks int...I love the name of the dog and the story looks interesting. I think many kids would relate to this.<br /><br />Good luck!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03216407428320615449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-78301179293032829762010-01-31T16:21:12.359-06:002010-01-31T16:21:12.359-06:00This is cute, fun, and heartfelt, but I'd like...This is cute, fun, and heartfelt, but I'd like to know what separates this from the other boy-and-dog stories out there. Love the title!Amanda Morganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13076186186805723426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-50756698979470977952010-01-31T16:06:31.421-06:002010-01-31T16:06:31.421-06:00Boomerang is a great name. I think this query is w...Boomerang is a great name. I think this query is well-written and concise. I would include a word count and any writing experience you might have, and what makes your book not just another dog story. Good luck!Michelle L. Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18144191129362767115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-68512872362368822442010-01-31T15:27:18.801-06:002010-01-31T15:27:18.801-06:00This looks like a fun, light story, but I think yo...This looks like a fun, light story, but I think your query needs to include a word count.Catch My Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06338761214938263819noreply@blogger.com