tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post9065485314077674939..comments2023-08-06T04:09:05.980-05:00Comments on Cornell DeVille : Entry 10Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-64498344259814593932010-02-16T15:50:28.818-06:002010-02-16T15:50:28.818-06:00I would start with the second paragraph. I was unc...I would start with the second paragraph. I was unclear whether your narr. was passing INTO or OUT of the room at first.<br /><br />Great description of Puck, although I also wondered about the Shakespeare connection.Michelle L. Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18144191129362767115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-26906603169272970782010-02-16T06:31:54.762-06:002010-02-16T06:31:54.762-06:00Oh, I love this genre. Of course I want to read mo...Oh, I love this genre. Of course I want to read more!<br /><br />PS - And to dispel others' confusion - the MC is calling Puck a "trickster," I believe?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07570437173288571934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-13642946491543603622010-02-15T21:31:24.321-06:002010-02-15T21:31:24.321-06:00This is one of my favorite topics, so yes, I'm...This is one of my favorite topics, so yes, I'm hooked. I wondered about the name choice, too, but that only lends to the hook at this point. It might prove otherwise later on.<br /><br />Obviously, the MC knows Puck, and knows something bad is going to come from his visit.Cordelia Dinsmorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10704456269484202163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-70866512569872753822010-02-15T21:25:17.350-06:002010-02-15T21:25:17.350-06:00I think I'd be more hooked if I were a fantasy...I think I'd be more hooked if I were a fantasy reader and knew what a fae was. Are they dangerous?<br /><br />The writing is very good.Catch My Wordshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06338761214938263819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-3281727799505127762010-02-15T20:32:33.877-06:002010-02-15T20:32:33.877-06:00It didn't much hook me. It's not that it&#...It didn't much hook me. It's not that it's badly written, but there's not enough tension in it. Also, is the faerie's name Puck or Trickster?MBeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17325522661963443320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-41811768557379653772010-02-15T19:21:35.056-06:002010-02-15T19:21:35.056-06:00Not sure how I feel about the Puck thing. And, th...Not sure how I feel about the Puck thing. And, the narrator loses me a bit, to the point where I'm not quite sure who is the Fairy, and who is the Earth-born..<br /><br />What I was really hoping for was something glitteringly unpredictable that established the scene and these characters' relationship... and ages... Is the human school-age and finds a fairy doing calculus homework (badly...?) ? Are they adult and the Other-worlder has found the "soft-and-fluffy" garments drawer?<br /><br />I really hope for something to catch me by surprise, but I'm afraid I stepped out of this one thinking, "Fairy in the bedroom, mischief ensues."Nicholas McRaehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13423319176143332749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-9884133934289239502010-02-15T16:43:27.970-06:002010-02-15T16:43:27.970-06:00Is this a take off of A Midsummer Night's Drea...Is this a take off of A Midsummer Night's Dream? Or are you just using the Puck?Josin L. McQueinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05751043333147850336noreply@blogger.com