tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-89399518046324944082024-03-18T22:43:19.337-05:00Cornell DeVille Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger452125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-70824442691793810572014-05-28T10:53:00.000-05:002014-05-29T17:20:39.666-05:00On Writing<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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When trying to come up with something of value for today’s post, I decided to ask some of my old writing friends about writing and see if they had any ideas or suggestions they could share. They actually had quite a bit to say. Quite a bit, on the various aspects of writing, that is far more valuable than anything I could come up with this morning.<br />
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C.S. Lewis mentioned a previous post about <a href="http://cornelldeville.blogspot.com/2010/06/there-are-no-new-story-ideas.html">originality</a>. Here’s the comment: <br />
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<b><i>Even in literature and art, no man who bothers about originality will ever be original: whereas if you simply tell the truth (without caring twopence how often it has been told before) you will, nine times out of ten, become original without ever having noticed it.</i></b><br />
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My dear friend, John Steinbeck, had this to say when we discussed the post about <a href="http://cornelldeville.blogspot.com/2010/07/quitting-will-you-can-you.html">giving up</a>:<br />
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<b><i>The writer must believe that what he is doing is the most important thing in the world. And he must hold to this illusion even when he knows it is not true.</i></b><br />
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Anne Sexton agreed and added this:<br />
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<b><i>When I am writing I am doing the thing I was meant to do.</i></b><br />
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Ray Bradbury put it a little more graphically:<br />
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<b><i>If you did not write every day, the poisons would accumulate and you would begin to die, or act crazy or both – you must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.</i></b><br />
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I love the advice I received from my dear old friend, Ernest Hemingway:<br />
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<b><i>The best way is always to stop when you are going good and when you know what will happen next. If you do that every day when you’re rewriting a novel you will never be stuck.</i></b><br />
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I like Philip Martin's take on the whole writing thing:<br />
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<b><i>In the end, writing skills are mostly absorbed, not learned. Like learning to speak as a native speaker, learning to write well is not just learning a set of rules or techniques. It’s a huge, messy body of deep language, inspired by bits of readings, conversations, incidents; it’s affected by how you were taught and where you live and who you want to become. For every convention, there is another way that may work better. For every rule, there are mavericks who succeed by flaunting it. There is no right or wrong way to write, no ten easy steps.</i></b><br />
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Anton Chekhov had some good advice on showing vs. telling:<br />
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<b><i>Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.</i></b><br />
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On giving up, George Orwell said:<br />
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<b><i>Writing a book is a horrible, exhausting struggle, like a long bout of some painful illness. One would never undertake such a thing if one were not driven on by some demon whom one can neither resist nor understand.</i></b><br />
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And finally, Sinclair Lewis brought it all full circle when he said:<br />
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<b><i>It is impossible to discourage the real writers – they don’t give a damn what you say, they’re going to write.</i></b>Unknownnoreply@blogger.com11tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-77631134585469040692014-05-26T15:05:00.000-05:002014-05-26T23:04:58.451-05:00Your Author Platform<a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhzYL4e9LokjQDuue3GD8hl7lqC_Fjmt6eVvcRDQhnvQVzjj7d1uHPym3OdxCn_itxMlQMbJXfr9smM9uvYt5b24lGPqodhkYY4UNTpKKvpTDI7VP3g9ZdHi2Is-oRGylv2WSkO8FZwlpc/s1600/billy+peeking.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="clear: left; float: left; margin-bottom: 1em; margin-right: 1em;"><img border="0" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhzYL4e9LokjQDuue3GD8hl7lqC_Fjmt6eVvcRDQhnvQVzjj7d1uHPym3OdxCn_itxMlQMbJXfr9smM9uvYt5b24lGPqodhkYY4UNTpKKvpTDI7VP3g9ZdHi2Is-oRGylv2WSkO8FZwlpc/s1600/billy+peeking.jpg" /></a><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: large;">Before you ask, that photo is my cat, Billy. He's a very special member of the family, and he knows it. But back to business.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: large;">I almost skipped blogging today, since it's Memorial Day, but I thought I would post this short article since it's Marketing Monday. So, let's talk about marketing. And let's be very specific and talk about marketing YOU!</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: large;">We've all heard the news. If you're going to be an author—especially a self-published one—you need a platform. I wrote a previous article on this very subject, but it's so important that I wanted to post another one just to drive the point home. If you'd like to read the first one, (which is a bit more detailed and includes a good smattering of great links on the same subject) here's a <a href="http://cornelldeville.blogspot.com/2011/09/branding-marketing-and-your-platform.html" target="_blank">LINK</a> to it.<br />
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What I wanted to concentrate on in this post is the Facebook phenomenon. Nearly everyone has a FB presence today. And there are new pages being set up every hour of the day, even as I write this, and even as you're reading it. So, because it is such a popular social media site, and growing because it's now considered the "thing to do," you need to be there.<br />
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You can start out with a simple <i>personal</i> home page. Then, you can create a <i>professional </i>page. And it's all free. Most writers create an author page that their fans can visit and post questions or comments, or learn about the author's newest projects or releases. With your own author page, you can post the art for your new cover (that's always exciting!). Or you can include a link to your "buy" page on Amazon or Barnes & Noble. You can link to your blog where you've posted an excerpt or a character interview. You can include your YouTube videos if you have a YouTube channel. There's lots of things you can do. The important aspect of all this is that your author page will give you another marketing channel. You'll have different visitors than you have on your blog. Different friends than you have on Twitter. It helps expand your universe in a multi-directional manner.<br />
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On a personal note, my personal page is getting very close to the 5,000 friend limit that Facebook imposes. Because of that, I've created an author page. It's currently gaining some new followers. It's important that you promote your own page so you can increase the number of friends who follow you. Those are members of your potential market.<br />
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If you'd like to visit my author page, here's another <a href="http://www.facebook.com/cornelldeville" target="_blank">LINK</a>. I hope you'll "LIKE" it.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: large;">And just so you know, since we said at the start that we were going to talk about you, I used the word "you" (or a form of it) 39 times in this post. </span>Unknownnoreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-36019519501009467522014-05-23T12:23:00.000-05:002014-05-23T13:00:14.362-05:00Kindle Giveaway!<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;">So, yep. You read it right. I'm going to be giving away a Kindle. This should be a fun giveaway, and someone is going to end up with a very nice prize. So </span><span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">be sure to check back for the giveaway details in a few days. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">One thing you might want to do, so there's no chance that you'll miss out on the entry window, is to head over to the right sidebar, at the very top, and enter your email address in the form where it says <b>FREE NEWSLETTER</b>. </span><span style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;">That way you'll get a weekly summary every Sunday of everything we talked about during the week. Once we get to 100 subscribers, we'll get this giveaway started.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;">And be sure to leave a comment below and let me know if this is a prize you would be interested in.</span></div>
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<br />Unknownnoreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-13146549690172270802014-05-21T00:01:00.000-05:002014-05-21T13:25:09.908-05:00The Breath of Life<div style="text-align: justify;">
<span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">Today is Writing Wednesday. So let's talk about the art of writing, and let's specifically talk about those pesky characters that inhabit the settings you've created. </span></div>
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<span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">I received a call from my sister last night. She is also a writer and has her own blog right <a href="http://www.cordeliadinsmore.blogspot.com/" target="_blank">HERE</a>. You should visit her some time and tell her I sent you. She does write some darned good posts over there. But, back to our conversation, which actually turned out to be the basis for this post. The phone call went something like this:</span></div>
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<i><span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;"><b>"Yes. They seem real to me, too," she replied."But what makes them real?"</b></span></i></div>
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<i><span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;"><b>"I mean, some of the characters in the stories I read just don't seem real. Others do. I'm wondering if the author writes them in such a way that they don't seem real. I mean, does the author do that on purpose?"</b></span></i></div>
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<span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">I didn't have an answer for her. We talked for a while about it, and the name of Neil Gaiman came up along with the button-eyed-other-mother in <i>Coraline</i>. This character seemed very two-dimensional and not very "real" to me when I met her—at least not real in the same sense that Coraline seemed real. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">After giving it a bit more thought, I felt confident that, with Neil's writing talent, he must have created those not-so-real images intentionally. But, I wasn't 100% certain of that. Perhaps, if Neil reads this blog, he can answer that question personally for us. If you know Neil, please ask him to visit us and leave a comment with the answer we're looking for.</span></span></div>
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<span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">Since we didn't come up with a real answer to the question, our conversation ended and we hung up. But the remnants remained in my head, and a related question started festering and pestering the back of my brain. It was simply this: How do you breathe life into a character and make them into a real person in the reader's mind? What are the ingredients of life that you need to include? I knew some research was in my immediate future before I could put it to rest. Much of the following information was gleaned from an article compiled by writing coach Jessica Morrell. I think she's done a very good job on covering some of the basic elements. In fact, her website is a wealth of information on writing. I highly recommend it. Click <a href="http://www.jessicamorrell.com/" target="_blank">HERE</a> and bookmark it for later perusal.</span><br />
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<span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">Bring your characters onto the stage with pizzazz, make them memorable, solid and consistent from the first moment they come into view—bigger than life. Whenever possible, bring your characters to life through all the five senses. Don't be lazy and only show us what the narrator sees.</span></div>
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<span class="promotxt" style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">Characters are formed from a group of traits that are consistent and memorable. As you bring your characters to life, first create a base of dominant and important traits. These traits will remain consistent throughout the story and will be important to the events of the plot. It is best to open with a scene, event, or description that displays these traits. Our first impressions of a character should convey one or more of his or her dominant traits. Examples of these traits: strong, intelligent, brave, clever, self-assured, rash, headstrong. </span><span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">Second, add character tags and traits such as smoking, fidgeting, quality of voice that complement and deepen the main traits. Third, add more traits that reveal the complexity of your character. These are traits that appear contradictory, but only appear after the dominant layer is officially established.</span><br />
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<span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">Make your main characters somehow extraordinary or bigger than life. They should stand out in crowd—although that doesn't necessarily mean they must be flashy, just unforgettable. Fictional characters are made of heroic proportions. There is generally something exaggerated or enlarged about who they are. They are important and memorable. While they can share some traits with your family members, friends, or neighbors, they are much more compelling and vivid. The reader must believe that they are unique, unusual, special, one-of-a-kind.</span><br />
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<span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">Luckily for fiction writers, techniques for revealing character are many. Characters are portrayed via exposition, description, narration and action. Characters are portrayed by conflict with their environment, conflict with other characters, action, self-discovery, self-realization, and change. Dialogue tags can reveal character including physical traits, appearance, mannerisms, habits, expressions and gestures. </span><span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">You can also reveal a character through a self-portrait or confession, anecdotes, dialogue, tastes, interests, possessions, setting, the opinion of others, thoughts, introspection and decisions. (You might want to visit </span><a href="http://cornelldeville.blogspot.com/2010/06/my-breath-rushed-in-when-i-realized.html" style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">THIS POST </a><span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">regarding dialogue and vocabulary.)</span><br />
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<span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">In </span><i style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">Practical Tips for Writing Popular Fiction</i><span style="color: #444444; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">, Robin Carr gives the following advice on creating emotional impact via characterization:</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">In case I didn't mention it previously, I have decided to create a new schedule for my blog posts on this site. Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. Here's my logic behind it:</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;"><b>WRITING WEDNESDAY:</b> Topics related to writing. This is a huge area so it might include anything.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">So there you have it. That's the future as we see it at this point and those are the days you can look forward to seeing something new and exciting (hopefully) on this page.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;">And since this is our first <b>MARKETING MONDAY</b>, the first new and exciting thing I wanted to mention today is my most recent discovery of </span><a href="http://www.mailchimp.com/" style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;" target="_blank">MAIL CHIMP</a><span style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;">. It is a FREE service that you might want to check out, especially if you're interested in providing your friends, followers, customers, etc., with an update on your activities, products, work, whatever. (That's a marketing exercise.) Mail Chimp is an opt-in program, so there's never any spam involved. If you take a look to the right, near the top, you'll see a sign-up form. Just enter your email address and you will receive a copy of my newsletter every week. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">There are a lot of possibilities with a newsletter and a large mailing list. (Mine is currently quite small, since I just started it. I hope you will sign up so it can grow a bit more.) Anyway, as I was saying, I can see some potential with a newsletter. For example, if we have a giveaway here on this site, I can announce the details, and the winner, via the newsletter.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; text-align: justify;">So, that's today's topic. Wednesday, I'm going to post an article about openings and beginnings, so be sure and check back for that. Meanwhile, feel free to sign up for the newsletter and share this post with your Facebook and Twitter friends. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">The last time we were together, we talked a bit about publishing your own eBook. Since that's a recent topic of discussion, and since there were quite a few hits on that post, I wanted to continue with that subject and expand on it a bit more today.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">If you’re planning on publishing your work as a digital edition (eBook) and selling it through Amazon, here’s a brief primer on some very basic things you need to know in order to give your finished product the professional appearance it deserves. This is not an advanced narrative on .html coding (which you don't really need to know) but rather a few pointers that most beginners will find helpful in getting their manuscript into a professional form. If nothing else, it will provide you a good starting point for avoiding most of the common mistakes that first-time publishers make.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">The following information is taken from my new How-To manual on the same subject, and it's written with the presumption that you’re using Microsoft Word as your text editor. If you’re using something else, you’ll have to translate these instructions into the language of that software. So let’s begin.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">First of all, you don’t need to include a bunch of returns to get your curser from the end of one chapter to the start of the next. In fact, you don't want to do that. Instead, after the period in the final sentence of your first chapter, hit one return. Then go to the top tool bar and select <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">INSERT, BREAK, PAGE BREAK</b>. That will force the chapter heading to the top of the following page when it’s viewed on an e-reader. Then go back and delete all of those extra returns. If you want to see all of the formatting symbols, go to the top menu bar and click on the paragraph symbol. (It's that little thing that looks like a backward capital P.) That will make everything show up. It's an on-off toggle, so clicking it again will turn them off.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">The next item, and one that a lot of authors have issue with, involves paragraph indents. If you’ve created your document using tabs for your indents, don’t remove them. You can format the document to create the indents you need. Following is the simplest and quickest way to accomplish this, but it’s going to involve a little clean up at the end. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">STEP TWO</b>: Go to <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">FORMAT, PARAGRAPH</b>. This will open a new window with several options. You’ll need to specify the choices you want. The top item is <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">ALIGNMENT</b>. Make sure it’s either set to <b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;">LEFT </b>or<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"> JUSTIFIED, </b>whichever you prefer. I personally think the justified alignment reads better.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;">The next section is the paragraph indentation. The first window asks for a value. Don’t enter anything in this area. To the right of that box is a drop down menu. Click the arrow and select </span><b style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;">FIRST LINE</b><span style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;">. When you do that, the default value that should pop up in the next window is .5”. I usually change this value to .2". And that’s it for that part. Click </span><b style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;">OK</b><span style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;">.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">At this point, you’ll need to go back through your document and adjust anything that shouldn’t be indented. Some of these areas might include chapter headings, copy that you want centered (which will still be centered, but it will be moved to the right of center by whatever indent you selected). You’ll also need to check your first and second pages, which typically contain the title, the copyright, the ISBN data, etc. Be sure to use the PAGE BREAK at the end of those pages as well, and get rid of all those extra returns.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">The next thing you’ll need to do is check the indents you just specified. You may discover that some of your paragraphs are indented twice the amount you wanted, since we didn't remove the hard tabs. Word will typically ignore those tabs since you’ve formatted the paragraph, but sometimes it will lose its mind and give you a double indent. Just delete them if you see any.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">Next comes page numbers. If you’ve inserted them, you need to remove them. Since the Kindle screen is a different size than an 8.5 x 11 sheet of paper, which is typically what most writers set their default page size at, and since readers can vary the size of the type on their screen, you really have no idea where the pages are going to break. We really don’t need a page number appearing in the middle of the screen. So just delete them. Also delete any headers or footers you’ve added to your Word document. </span><span style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif;">Finally, when you’re ready to save, save your file as a .doc document so you can modify it later if necessary. Later, when you get ready to covert your book to .mobi, you'll need to save it as an .html file.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">We've covered a lot of material here in a short amount of space, and it may sound a bit confusing. If you want a lot more detail (with screen shots) and some tricks on the proper method for adding graphic elements such as chapter heading icons, charts, photos, etc., you may want to download a copy of my new eBook that will give you a more complete and detailed version of everything you need to know. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;">Here's a <a href="http://www.amazon.com/HOW-PUBLISH-YOUR-eBOOK-HOURS-ebook/dp/B00JASCYCA/ref=sr_1_3?ie=UTF8&qid=1400217434&sr=8-3&keywords=cornell+deville" target="_blank">LINK</a> if you'd like the complete step-by-step directions for getting your book formatted, converted, and uploaded to Amazon.</span></div>
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Unknownnoreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-80621631108183823412014-05-14T21:41:00.000-05:002014-05-14T09:57:07.621-05:00Are you published yet?<br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif; font-size: large;">As technology grows in leaps and bounds and the economy continues to stagnate, many industries are changing—including publishing.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">It seems the team members associated with the various houses within the traditional publishing industry—especially those who work either directly or indirectly in the acquisitions arena—have become an increasingly selective and subjective group. They have raised the bar, and it almost appears that nothing submitted to them with less potential than another <i>Harry Potter</i> is even being considered by the acquisitions editors. Fortunately, that situation is changing.</span></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif;"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">Anyone who knows me will tell you that I am not a modest person when it comes to my writing. In fact, I will look you straight in the eye and state, quite matter-of-factly, that I am an excellent storyteller. And </span><span style="font-size: large;">I'm certain there are those of you reading this who are also excellent writers. I know for a fact that there are tons of unpublished manuscripts out there that are equal to, or better than, a lot of the published books I've read. It drives me crazy that publishers are letting so many good books remain unpublished. The good news is that the old world where traditional publishers ruled with an iron hand and maintained complete control of everything is quickly fading into history.</span><span style="font-size: large;"> </span></span></div>
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">Times have changed. The old system that we lived with for so many years is no longer the <i>only</i> way to get a book published. The recent advent of digital publishing and POD (print-on-demand) changed the model. </span><span style="font-size: large;">So, a couple of years ago, I decided to ignore the rejection letters and to publish my books myself. </span></span><br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">And you can do the same thing. </span><span style="font-size: large;">Each of us now has the option of taking matters into our own hands and becoming our own agents, publicists, editors and publishers. And, with today's technology, it's a doable endeavor. In addition, it can be done with practically no cost.</span></span></div>
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Georgia, Times New Roman, serif; font-size: large;">If you're a writer, you're going to fall into one of two groups: those who have published your own book, and those who haven't. If you're in the latter group, it may be because you're not yet up-to-speed on how to go about it. If that's the case, I'm going to remove that excuse by providing a link at the end of this post to a new book I've just published (it's a 99-center) that will give you and easy-to-follow, step-by-step guide showing you exactly how to format, convert, and upload your book to Amazon. Trust me on this. It's not nearly as ominous a task as you might think. In fact, anyone can do it in a very short time and you're going to be amazed at how easy it really is. Your book can be on Amazon by this time tomorrow!</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">Now, here's that <a href="http://www.amazon.com/HOW-PUBLISH-YOUR-eBOOK-HOURS-ebook/dp/B00JASCYCA/ref=sr_1_3?ie=UTF8&qid=1400047929&sr=8-3&keywords=cornell+deville" target="_blank">LINK</a>.</span></span></div>
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While books and film are obviously two distinct mediums, the basic manner of telling a story remains the same in both. Since we recently discussed the old "show vs tell" topic, I thought we might take it one step further and examine a short clip that demonstrates how the process of telling a story is the same regardless of the medium, and how showing is usually so much more interesting than telling.<br />
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This scene begins like a good book should start: We have an opening visual of two characters. The characters TELL us that it's raining and that we're in California. Their dialogue takes us right into the story and we know what's going on: These two are in love. And from his DIALOGUE, the character played by Gene Kelly lets us know that he's about as happy as a feller ever gets.<br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: large;">We've all been advised, many times, to "Show, don't tell." It's become a repeated mantra from members of critique groups—like a broken record. Many consider it one of the most important rules of fiction. New writers are continually advised to let the reader discover what they are saying by watching the action and listening to the dialogue instead of reading a descriptive narrative.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: large;">Well, brace yourselves for this writer’s opinion. It’s good advice, but it’s not a universal truth that transcends every other rule of writing. While it is true that showing instills life into your characters and scenes, it’s not necessary to “show” all the time. Some things need to be told rather than shown. Telling provides a shortcut. It can offer a better solution for moving the reader quickly from one dramatic scene to the next, keeping the pace accelerated and holding the readers' interest. If a writer uses showing all the time, their words can blur into monotony with the same rhythm and tone. Worse, the important parts, the dramatic parts, won’t stand out, and you will end up wearing your reader out unnecessarily.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: georgia;">Do you carefully create an outline before you type the first word? Or do you just sit down at the keyboard and start pecking away? </span><br />
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<i><span style="color: #660000; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: 14pt;">the impossibles, the won’ts. </span></i></div>
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<span style="color: #1a1a1a; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: 14pt;">Melissa Donovan has included the great passage above in her article on Writing Forward entitled <i><a href="http://www.writingforward.com/writing-tips/excellent-writing-tips-from-successful-authors" target="_blank">Excellent Writing Tips from Successful Authors</a></i>. And it’s appropriate that she begins with that, because inspiration is always the first requirement of creative writing. You may be the best mystery plotter on the planet, but until you have an idea of where your story is going, that skill isn’t going to do you much good. A swift kick-start of inspiration is the best solution for getting things churning around in your head so you can transfer those thoughts to your anxious typing digits.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="color: #1a1a1a; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: 14pt;">Once you’ve been inspired and have an idea of where you’re going to take your anxious reader, you can begin. You need to start off with a bang. It's my firm belief that a great opening is the best way to greet your new reader and grab their attention. The following opening line is from <i>Stormbreaker</i>, and it's one of my favorite beginnings.</span><br />
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<span style="color: #1a1a1a; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: 14pt;">So a strong start is key to whetting the reader's appetite. But you can't fail to deliver. You need to keep their interest high as the story unfolds. If you don't, they'll put your book down and pick up another. And when it comes to knowing how to maintain a reader's interest, <a href="http://www.jodierennerediting.com/" target="_blank">Jodie Renner</a> is one of the best. She's a creative writer and a professional editor who has written a great post about how that’s done. This is a three-part series entitled <i>Tension on Every Page</i>. You can read the first installment (and it’s very good) at the <a href="http://www.writersforensicsblog.wordpress.com/" target="_blank">Writer’s Forensics Blog</a>.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="color: #1a1a1a; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: 14pt;">So, you’ve got the inspiration, you’ve grabbed your reader with a fantastic opening paragraph, and you’ve just completed the first draft of chapter one. And as The Carpenter's song from the 70s informs—we've only just begun. You know you’ve got to keep going or you’ll never finish this masterpiece. So how do you maintain that productive attitude and keep churning out those 2,000 words a day? Ann Aguirre has the answer for you. Her post on <a href="http://writerunboxed.com/2012/01/11/five-productivity-tips/" target="_blank">Writer Unboxed</a>, entitled <i>Five Productivity Tips,</i> is an excellent treatment with some great advice.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="color: #1a1a1a; font-family: Georgia, 'Times New Roman', serif; font-size: 14pt;">So there you are. You’ve got the ingredients of a great novel right here on this page. Now all you need to do is get inspired, keep the tension on the pages, and remain productive. Before you know it, you’ll be typing <i>The End</i>. As we all know, that’s when the editing begins. But we’ll talk about that another day.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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Unknownnoreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-32333670712070515562014-05-04T11:55:00.000-05:002014-05-04T16:28:23.800-05:00BACKSTORY BLUESI've linked a new Cornell DeVille YouTube video to this post because I wanted my readers to understand the concept of backstory and how it relates to starting your manuscript out on the best foot. It doesn't matter whether you're writing a middle grade adventure, a young adult romance, or even a picture book. The key point to remember is simply this: you need to capture the attention of your reader as early as possible. Let me repeat that because it's vitally important.<br />
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Most new writers love to write. In fact, they love to write everything they can think of in order to inform the reader about every fact and aspect of the story, the setting, the characters, the situation, etc. They will write until the cows come home before they get to the point. And that's sometimes the cause of the reader closing the book and looking for something else that doesn't drone on and on while it meanders slowly in its circuitous route toward something more interesting.<br />
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Obviously, backstory is important to your story. However, it's not the most important aspect. Grabbing the reader's attention is the critical issue to consider when you start writing. If you can do that with a narrative hook in the first few paragraphs, you can lock your reader in for another 50 or 75 pages. Provide them with a situation that places a question in their mind, and they'll keep reading until they discover the answer. That gives you, as the writer of this epic, some breathing room that you can use to weave your back story in so the reader can become intimately familiar with your characters while you let the plot play out.<br />
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I hope you will take the seven minutes required to view the video below. Then take another seven minutes and read the first few pages of your WIP. After you've done that, answer this question: Does the beginning of your WIP capture your attention? If not, maybe you need to do a little housekeeping and rearranging. Get the interesting bits up front so your reader can discover them early on.<br />
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Good luck. For some additional insight on openings, check this <a href="http://cornelldeville.blogspot.com/2012/12/opening-lines.html" target="_blank">ARTICLE</a>.<br />
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For a video version of this topic, visit my YouTube channel <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gKOUPARwPrM" target="_blank">HERE</a>.<br />
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I hope you'll leave me a comment. Keep writing. Someone has to do it.<br />
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<br />Unknownnoreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-2912478279536208692014-05-03T14:24:00.002-05:002014-05-03T14:25:38.862-05:00YouTube Companion Channel<iframe allowfullscreen="" frameborder="0" height="315" src="//www.youtube.com/embed/VP5aIBTa5eQ" width="560"></iframe><br/>
It's only in the planning stages at the moment, but I have just created a new YouTube channel to accompany my website, blog, Facebook, and Twitter media exposure. I hope you will check out the channel trailer I created, visit the channel, and subscribe for updates as new info is posted.<br />
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Why do I need a YouTube channel? Simply because it's sometimes easier if someone explains something in person rather than in printed media. Plus, it allows viewers to post comments and questions.<br />
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I hope you'll take a moment to watch the video trailer and visit my new channel.<br />
As always, thanks for your support.<br />
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<br />Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-79079509836303410952014-05-01T11:42:00.002-05:002014-05-01T11:43:33.491-05:00Free Copies of Skullhaven!<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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Tomorrow is the big day. I'm having a FREE PROMOTION on Amazon for my newest middle grade adventure. I hope everyone who visits this blog will head over there and get their free copy. And, if you enjoy it, I hope you will write a review to tell other readers what you thought.<br />
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If you have a middle grade reader in your home, or if you're a teacher looking for a possible book for your class, please take advantage of this opportunity to get your free copy.<br />
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<br />Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-66446311110813434042014-05-01T08:00:00.000-05:002014-04-30T23:13:21.180-05:00Building your platform<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">I have received several comments and emails from writers who are actively engaged in building an online presence. This is becoming an important aspect of getting agented, published, and selling your books if you choose the self-publishing route. But how do you do it effectively? This post will explore some of the no-cost avenues currently available.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">Obviously, you're going to need a website or a blog. The former is not a no-cost option, but the latter is if you use Google's <a href="http://www.blogger.com/">Blogger</a> service, which is the platform this blog uses. It's simple to create a blog and quite easy to update. You can also use <a href="http://www.wordpress.com/">Wordpress</a>. It used to have a cost associated with it, but it appears to be free at this point. Either of those two options will provide a good starting point for getting your name out there on the internet with no out-of-pocket expenditures. Free is good!</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">After you have a presence in the digital world, where do you go from there? How do you let people know you're out there and ready to share your wonderful information? This is where the power of social media takes over. Digital communities like <a href="http://www.facebook.com/">Facebook</a> and <a href="http://www.twitter.com/">Twitter</a> can get you into the flow and start traffic heading toward your site to read your informative posts.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">But, what will I write about, you may be asking. Remember, it can't be all about you. Keep it topical, based on the purpose of your blog and your readership. You can include a poll to get a feel for the demographics and interests of your readers. When I started this blog, I wanted to provide other writers with help and information. I wanted it to be a place where we could share our work and offer suggestions and comments. I placed a couple of polling booths to determine what type of work my readers were writing.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">The bottom line is that you need to provide some valuable content that will keep your loyal readers coming back to gain from your personal knowledge and experience and connect to the links you can provide them for even more information. It's also important to keep in mind that a blog is like a new puppy. It's cute and sweet at the beginning, but you have to feed it on a regular basis, usually every day. It won't survive for long if you don't give it the attention it needs.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">You can also spread your knowledge around. Offer to be a guest blogger on other blogs, and try to leave comments on other blogs that are insightful. Another opportunity to get your work out there is to enter contests that other writers and agents are having on their own blogs. You may not always win, but sometimes agents may be interested enough to request material from you. </span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">What I've included in this post is simply some of the most basic info on building your own platform. Hopefully, it will provide a starting point for you. Andrea Brown literary agent <a href="http://kidlit.com/2010/02/26/online-platform-dos-donts/">Mary Kole</a> has an excellent post on the Do's and Don'ts of creating your platform that goes into a bit more depth than this post.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">And, of course, we're all curious. If you have jumped onto the I'm-building-a-platform bandwagon, leave a comment and let us know what you've done and what's worked for you.</span>Unknownnoreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-61146768494335970302014-04-29T08:58:00.000-05:002014-04-29T10:55:25.518-05:00Is your modifier dangling?The subject for this post came to mind when I remembered Groucho Marx saying, "One morning I shot an elephant in my pajamas. How he got in my pajamas I don't know."<br />
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A dangling modifier is an error in sentence structure whereby a grammatical modifier is associated with a word other than the one intended, or with no particular word at all. For example, a writer may have meant to modify the subject, but word order makes the modifier seem to modify an object instead. Such ambiguities can lead to unintentional humor or difficulty in understanding a sentence. Here are a few examples:<br />
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<b>At the age of eight, my family finally bought a dog.</b><br />
<b>Walking down Main Street, the trees were beautiful.</b><br />
<b>As president of the kennel club, my poodle must be well groomed.</b><br />
<b>Screaming for help, David's fingers gripped the edge of the cliff.</b><br />
<b>After living under a pile of dust for thirty years, I found the documents.</b><br />
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We know what we're trying to say, but sometimes we just get a little confused and end up with something that may be a bit funnier than we intended. Of course, if you're writing humor, the dangling modifier may be your best friend.<br />
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Now it's your turn. Give us an example of your own. Just click on that Comment thing and type away.Unknownnoreply@blogger.com4tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-4060466013634890262014-04-27T21:30:00.001-05:002014-04-27T21:41:24.037-05:00Digital Publishing—FREE COPIES!<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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There are probably thousands, maybe millions, of great book manuscripts lying in drawers, gathering dust, and never being read by those for whom they were intended. Why? Because those writers have given up on the traditional publishing methodology and have failed to embrace the new digital publishing model. And it's time those books were published. If you're a writer, and you're ready to publish your book, this post was written with you in mind.<br />
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Digital publishing has arrived, and a lot of writers have decided to take the self-publishing route. Many of them have done so quite successfully. Others have procrastinated simply because they have no idea how to go about it. With that dilemma in mind, I created and published a nuts-and-bolts, how-to manual that will help anyone achieve the status of published author—with very little effort and no cost. Yes, indeed, you can have your book published and available for sale on Amazon.com by this time tomorrow. It really is THAT easy to do.<br />
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I'm going to put a link to my book explaining the details of digital publishing right <a href="http://www.amazon.com/HOW-PUBLISH-YOUR-eBOOK-HOURS-ebook/dp/B00JASCYCA/ref=sr_1_3?ie=UTF8&qid=1398651133&sr=8-3&keywords=cornell+deville" target="_blank">HERE</a>. If you'd like to click it and go to Amazon and purchase it, I would certainly appreciate that. (It's only 99 cents.) However, just so I don't sound like a salesman, if you'd really like a copy, and you'd be open to writing a review at some point in the future, I'll send you a copy with no strings attached.<br />
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1. Go to my website <a href="http://www.cornelldeville.com/" target="_blank">HERE</a>.<br />
2. At the bottom next to the word CONTACT, click on the email address.<br />
4. Send me an email with <b>FREE BOOK</b> in the subject line.<br />
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I know you're a great writer, and this book will make it a piece of cake for you to get your manuscript formatted, converted, and uploaded to Amazon.com in no time at all. By this time tomorrow, you can be a published author!<br />
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<br />Unknownnoreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-68682176977029541922014-04-20T20:56:00.002-05:002014-04-22T01:12:45.249-05:00The Treasure of Morro Bay — Book One<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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I am in the process of doing a revision on Book One of the Treasure of Morro Bay trilogy. Why? Because I am about to format and publish Book Two (Deja Vu), and I wanted to give the series a new look and clean up a few stray typos I found.<br />
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I will be doing a FREE DAY on Book One in the near future, so stay tuned for that if you'd like to get a free copy of the first installment so you can read it before Deja Vu comes out later this summer.<br />
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Here's the new cover. I would welcome your comments!<br />
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I have revised the cover design. The background illustration was created by Pierre "Asahi" Raveneau. So far, the responses to the new cover design have all been quite positive. So, if you need any art or illustration for YOUR cover, I would highly recommend checking out Pierre's work.<br />
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Here's a <a href="http://www.asahiart.net/" target="_blank">LINK</a> to his site.<br />
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Meanwhile, don't forget to enter to win your FREE copy of Skullhaven. Check out the post below.<br />
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I hope you will leave a comment so I'll know you're out there.<br />
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<b><i>Skullhaven</i></b> launched today as a digital edition, and I've decided to host the first giveaway. If you'd like to enter, just follow the instructions on the form below. The giveaway ends at midnight April 15th, 2014. Winner will be selected by a random drawing.<br />
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If the entries exceed 25 but don't go past 49, <b>TWO COPIES</b> will be awarded.<br />
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<br />Unknownnoreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-91318391081519783672014-04-05T00:01:00.000-05:002014-04-30T17:02:58.679-05:00The Hero's Journey<br />
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<span style="font-size: large;">A great deal has been written over the years about the Hero's Journey. It can provide a blueprint for the writer in the construction of their novel.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;"><b><i>Orphan --- Wanderer --- Warrior --- Martyr</i></b></span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">As a writer, it’s your daunting task to take your character, and your readers, through these stages in the hero's journey by creating that wonderful plot around which everything revolves and evolves. Let’s take a brief look at these four stages and discuss some examples to provide a better idea of the progression.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;"><b>ORPHAN</b>: This can be a literal or a figurative situation for the hero. Sometimes it’s both. It puts the hero into a more vulnerable position, with no one to help them, so they have to think things out for themselves. Two examples are immediately obvious: Annie and Dorothy. These two characters are literal examples. One is living in an orphanage (like Lilly White in my most recent middle grade paranormal novel <i>Skullhaven</i>—pardon the shameless promotion) and the other resides with her Auntie Em. A more recent example can be found in the Harry Potter books.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">Figurative orphans may be more common. Gordie LaChance in <i>Stand by Me</i> is one example. He lives with his parents (who are now totally consumed with the death of his older brother) and Gordie is more or less isolated and forgotten. He finds companionship with his friends and a degree of solace in his writing. Other examples include Homer Hickam from the movie <i>October Sky</i>, Carrie from Stephen King's novel by the same name, and Neil Gaiman's Coraline. In <i>Finding Nemo</i>, both Nemo and his father could be classified as figurative orphans, each of them searching for the other. In <i>Lost in the Bayou</i>, Robin Sherwood is a figurative (and perhaps literal) orphan. In the opening chapter, we learn that her parents have disappeared—fate unknown.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">Within this “orphan” environment, the main character is presented with a problem, an obstacle, something that's wrong and simply has to be fixed. That’s where your wonderful plot begins. Usually this occurs with a “situation-changing-event,” such as Gandalf’s visit to Bilbo Baggins in <i>The Hobbit</i>. When that occurs, they become a…</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;"><b>WANDERER</b>: The hero, dissatisfied with their current situation (whatever it may be) embarks on a quest to resolve it and make it, or the world, better. Your hero may wander through many pages and numerous chapters, or they may only wander for a short time until they come up with a solution. When that happens, they become a…</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;"><b>WARRIOR</b>: This is where things begin to change. Your hero comes up with a plan, figures out what needs to be done and how to do it. But it’s never easy, or at least it shouldn't appear too easy. There must be some struggling, internally and/or externally. Obstacles come flying out of nowhere, slowing and stopping your hero's progress. They have to summon their courage, use their brains, or figure out what can be done to overcome whatever, or whomever, is blocking their success. Typically there is a “darkest moment” where things take a drastic turn for the worse and success and a happy ending seems all but impossible. Your hero may have to make a huge sacrifice, and sometimes put themselves into the most dangerous situation imaginable. This is when they reach the status of…</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;"><b>MARTYR</b>: This is the point where the hero risks everything, faces the danger and lays their life on the line if necessary in order to solve the problem and/or achieve their objective. They may have to dig down deep inside to find the courage to do what's necessary. As the writer, you need to make certain we feel their pain, their fear, their desperation. This is typically the climax chapter where the hero stands up and delivers. This is the defining moment, and the event that changes everything. The dark clouds separate, and the sun shines brightly. As readers, we are relieved that our hero has managed to escape the villain, the jaws of death, their loneliness, or whatever situation you (the writer) have placed them in. Problem solved. All is right with the world.</span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">So there you have it. This is the basic progression. For a much more detailed explanation, check out Joseph Campbell’s narrative at the following <st1:stockticker><a href="http://www.movieoutline.com/articles/the-hero-journey-mythic-structure-of-joseph-campbell-monomyth.html" target="_blank">LINK</a></st1:stockticker>. </span><br />
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<span class="Apple-style-span" style="font-size: large;">Your comments are always welcome!</span>Unknownnoreply@blogger.com7tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-57075044312819149992014-04-02T23:16:00.004-05:002014-04-02T23:26:15.565-05:00Writing for the senses...<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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The senses are a very powerful tool for adding realism to a story. As a reader, we enjoy it when the author takes us deep into the story and paints a realistic environment for the characters. As a writer, we need to strive to offer our readers no less.<br />
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The excerpt below is from my newly-released MG novel, <b>Skullhaven. </b>I selected it to provide an example of what I'm talking about regarding sensual input.<br />
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<span style="font-family: Cambria;"><i><b>Skullhaven Cemetery is across the
highway from the Sacred Heart orphanage. It lies in a shadowed valley where a
misty cloud of fog rises from the ground shortly after sunset. No streetlights
warm the soul on a chilly autumn evening, and once you step through the
creaking, rusting wrought iron entrance gate, the night wraps around you like a
damp shroud. It is an old and lonely place, where lost spirits haunt the
grounds until they move on—if they can.</b></i></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Cambria;">In this example we've covered four out the five senses. The only thing missing is the sense of smell. That's a bit unfortunate, because that sense is perhaps the most powerful for sparking memories and adding additional realism.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Cambria;">I hope you'll leave a comment and tell me what you think.</span></div>
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I've just uploaded the converted .mobi files to KDP for my new middle-grade paranormal novel, SKULLHAVEN. I will be offering free gift copies for anyone willing to read it and do a review on Amazon.<br />
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<i><b>Here's a blurb to give you a bit more info. </b></i><br />
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Lilly was only four years old when her mother kissed her
goodbye and told her she would be right back. And after seven years, Lilly
still wonders what happened to her. For the last seven years, Lilly has been
living at the Sacred Heart Orphanage across the highway from Skullhaven
Cemetery. It’s a spooky place for a timid girl. Especially at night.<o:p></o:p></div>
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Sister Carmen understands Lilly's fears, and she gives Lily
a necklace with an ancient cross and tells her it will protect her. But it does
more than that! Its mysterious power allows Lilly to see spirits who haven’t
crossed over.<o:p></o:p></div>
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When the wealthy and ruthless Egyptian antiquities dealer Horus Hawass visits the Sacred Heart Orphanage and sees Lilly’s necklace,
he recognizes it immediately as the priceless Golden Ankh of the ancient
Egyptian Queen Nefertiti. The greedy Horus Hawass quickly hatches a plan to
acquire it for himself, and he calls in a few of his seedy associates.<br />
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After kidnapping Lilly, he gives her an ultimatum: She can either give him the Golden
Ankh, or she can join her mother in Skullhaven Cemetery—forever.
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Skullhaven is a fun adventure with a hint of history, a bit of mystery, and a lot of complexity that will keep the middle-grade reader wondering what's going to happen next!</div>
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Unknownnoreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-49031907161544456342014-03-31T01:11:00.002-05:002014-03-31T01:11:11.346-05:00Two new designs...<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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Thanks to my dear friend, the great author Joe Perrone, Jr., I did a bit more work. He suggested using a three-dimensional gold typeface, which I think works great for this cover. Here are a couple of more entries. Your opinions would be helpful. I'm not sure which typeface I prefer. And, I've decided to nix the ankh. Just too many elements if I include it.<br />
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You can click on each one to get a larger image.<br />
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I would love your opinions and your input on these. A big thanks to Joe. Check out his books on Amazon. He's a great mystery writer!<br />
<br />Unknownnoreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8939951804632494408.post-34541502826310808592014-03-30T11:06:00.000-05:002014-03-30T18:41:02.719-05:00Skullhaven is coming soon...<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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I'm currently in the final stages of editing and formatting this spooky middle grade novel. I have decided to take a break and work on the cover design. Here are three that I'm considering.<br />
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I would love your input on these. If you want to click on each one, it will open in a larger size. Let me know which would attract you the most? We can name them 1, 2, and 3. (How clever is that?)<br />
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Thanks so much for your comments!<br />
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