Monday, January 25, 2010

Entry 40

Title: Sparks Fly
Genre: Young Adult

‘Busy, busy little bees.’ Zeke mused to himself as he watched people by the dozens hurry in and out of the coffee shop. ‘They’re all so caught up in their own lives that they don’t see what’s right in front of them.’ He chuckled as he watched the creature behind the counter hand a loud mouthed debutante her latte. He knew all the woman saw was a shy, run of the mill, college kid with shaggy brown hair and retro glasses. If she’d taken more than a passing glance at him she might have actually seen the low level demon.


  1. This is one of my favorites. Such a great scene created already with enough questions raised that I want to read more. Who is Zeke? How does he know the kid is a demon? Is he one, too? What's going on? Nice job!

  2. He is the demon, no one else... Or I got it all wrong?

  3. Thank you to everyone that commented and voted for me. Here is the tag line for Spraks Fly. It might explain it a little more.

    He's an archangel sent to eliminate the threat.
    She's a daughter of Hell on a mission.
    And when they meet sparks fly.

    I have the first mini-chapter posted on TextNovel. Here's the link

    Thanks again!
    Kelly Daniels


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