Title: Mountain Star
Genre: Fiction
Sometimes when your “Everything” hurts, the only option you have is to change “Everything”. But when your past is part of your “Everything”, then you have to find a way to dull the pain. Some things, no matter how painful, are written in stone. Hard, cold stone towering over your emotions like an early tombstone.
I really like this. It makes me want to know what "everything" is. The only things I might suggest you change is "Hard, cold" to "Cold, hard", if that flows better. And is "everything" supposed to be capitalized. That alone makes me want to read more, to see if this everything is someone or something or what. :)
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