Do dead people accomplish things? Or are these accomplishments before they died? There is some intrigue there, but it feels more gimicky to me. Who is doing the remembering? Who is being killed? I'm sure that all comes in the next paragraph but I'm not that interested.
oh wow... great hook....
ReplyDeleteI don't get it... sorry. Killing for the dead?
ReplyDeleteOoooh, sounds spooky. I would read on to find out what's happening,
ReplyDeleteDo dead people accomplish things? Or are these accomplishments before they died? There is some intrigue there, but it feels more gimicky to me. Who is doing the remembering? Who is being killed? I'm sure that all comes in the next paragraph but I'm not that interested.
ReplyDeleteI'm also a bit confused. Could you maybe expand this into two sentences and give a little more detail? Interesting title.
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